Thursday, January 5, 2012

MoP 5: When I Was Young

Free verse (AKA 'not really poetry') today - I have an idea I want to exorcise, but don't have time to turn it into a proper rhyming rhythm-having poem. So here it is as a slab of oddly phrased prose with line breaks in random places:

When I Was Young

When I was young
I had a rag doll called Jemima
I loved her like a sister
took her everywhere

When I was young
I had a blue My Little Pony
I really wanted a pink one
but loved her anyway

When I was young
I didn't have a lot of friends
But it didn't really matter
I had my things

When I was older
I moved out of home
and left my beloved things
under the bed

The box was shifted
forgotten
ignored
tripped over
dragged out
ignited
ashes
gone.

Now I am older
I have more friends, but not many
but I don't fill the gaps
with my things.

2 comments:

  1. But this is very powerful and well-writ. Well done you. And you can always try a sonnet tomorrow... or the next day... ;)

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  2. Catching up with other people doing the month of poetry. Love your work. Especially the one to your cat. Got three of the buggers myself and they might be a poem inspiration too.

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